Working on a KOTM Rewrite

I, for one, really liked Godzilla: King of the Monsters. However, I will not hesitate to admit that, in spite of my enjoyment of the film, I did have some problems with it.

And so in light of this, and after seeing it done by a few other individuals, I have begun work on my own, personal rewrite of the film.

Although perhaps "rewrite" is not quite an accurate term. What I'm essentially doing is strengthening the parts that I thought were weak, and making greater what I thought was already good. So it's less of a rewrite and more of an improvement of the overall thing.

You can find the beginnings of it here, at my Fanfiction.net account. I am open to answering any questions you may have, as I feel like there isn't really much to spoil with it aside from a few minor surprise references. And who knows? Maybe I can pick up some tips or ideas from around here as well.