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MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 5:30 PMGodzilla: Extinction
made by High FLYERS Tag Team Rough Draft by High FLYERS Tag Team Final Cut by IamGojira
(Seth comes inside) "How was football practice?" Dillion Gibbs says. Seth sits down with a sad face. "So, was it fun?" Dillion asks. "It. It. It went good I guess." Seth said. "What's wrong?" Dillion asked. "I've just been thinking about mom lately." Seth said. "I understand." Dillion said. "How about we go out to a hotel" "I guess." Seth said taking a bite of his food. When they got to the hotel they started unpacking. "Come on! Put a smile on! It will be fun! The hotels got a restaurant, a pool, a ..." "Dad, let's just go to our room." "Ok." Dillion said. They got to their hotel room. "So what do you want to do?" Dillion asked. "I guess we could go to eat." "Ok, let's go." Dillion said. They got to the restaurant in the hotel. "So, how have you and Chris been doing at school?" "Good." Seth said. The waiter came and took their order. "Hey look at the TV." Seth said. The TV said that there was strange movements of water heading toward their hotel in Florida. Their food came. "Dad why did mom go on that flight?" Seth asked. "Your mom always wanted to go to Japan, but I guess 1984 wasn't the best year. The earthquake was a big one, and well, your mother was there when it hit." Dillion said. Seth saw flashbacks of his mom. They went back to their room and went to bed.
At 2:54 a.m Seth heard sirens. "Dad! You hear that?" "Hear what?" Dillion asked. "Uhh Seth we need to get out now." They ran downstairs and everyone was running out. They started running. "Run Seth" Dillion tripped and got trampled. Seth stopped. "Run Seth!" Seth started crying but started running. He got outside and he turned around and couldn't see his dad. Then he saw spikes rising up above the hotel. He froze. The spikes got higher. Then, he saw a eyeball. He fell down and started crawling. Then he turned to look back. Just then, he saw a creature standing there by the hotel. The creature gave a roar then walked directly through the hotel.
20 years later. "Hey Seth, can you give me a hand?" asked Joshua. "Sure Josh where we gonna put it?" asked Seth. "By the bench." Said Joshua. They lift and carry a box full of bricks over to the bench. "So how has life been going?" asked Joshua. "Good, I mean I work at a construction site so what do you expect?" Said Seth. "Ok. See you around." Joshua said, laughing. Seth walks over to a bench to sit down. "Lunch time." Seth said. He starts eating. Then, a mic came on. "Everyone to the TV". Everyone gets around the TV to watch a news broadcast. "There are strange movements in the water". Seth got sick. He started getting Flashbacks of the 1994 night. All he could hear is "Run Seth!". Seth went where no one could see him and started punching the wall. Work ended and Seth went home. When he went home they were saying there are strange noises in the water. He couldn't take it any more and just went to bed.
When he woke up in the morning, he was still having flashbacks. He texted his foster Mom and said "I can't get the creature out of my head. Whatever it was killed my father and it's been 20 years since, and I'm STILL hearing: "Run Seth!" He went to work, and he saw some military vehicles parked outside. He was a bit confused, but he just went to work. Suddenly, a mic turned on. "Seth Gibbs report to my office." He then walked into his bosses office, his boss was just staring at him. "What did you want?" Then Seth got hit from behind, and got knocked out.
When Seth woke up, he could not see. He felt that his hands were handcuffed and that he was blindfolded. All of a sudden, someone grabbed him and helped walk him somewhere. Then, they threw him in a chair and took off his blindfold. "Where am I?" Seth asked. "We saw your text." "Who said that?" Seth asked "How do you know about that creature?" "What are you talking about?" Seth asked. "Everyone thinks this was a flood, and it will stay that way." "I don't know who you are, but this was not a flood." Seth said. "We know, but the thing is no one should know about this." "Whatever that was KILLED MY FATHER!" Seth said. "Your not answering the questions." "Tell me what that was!" Seth said. "Answer the questions." "No you answer my questions." Seth said. "Fine." General Reeve walked into the room. "Fine, Ill answer your questions if you answer mine." Reeve said. "What Killed my father?" The general stared at him. "Come on tell me. Tell me now because it killed my father and I was 4 when my mom died in Japan in 1984. Then, I had to grow up without a mom then my dad was killed at that hotel. I know whatever it was you guys kept a secret. How could you keep something that big a secret?" Seth said. The general started to think about 1984. Seth stood up. "What was it!?!" "I believe whatever killed your dad killed you mom." Reeve said.
Then he stood up and got a old tape. "This is footage we recorded of the creature in 1984." Then Reeve played footage of the creature's destruction in 1984. "Japan fought it but it blew them away. It literally shot blue fire out of its mouth and blew away the whole bay of soldiers. Japanese soldiers started calling it... Gojira. Our scientist called it Godzilla. We had to keep it a secret so the world would not go into a panic. So we kept it as just a flood and a earthquake. We haven't seen the creature since then, but another creature attacked in 1998. Our soldiers killed it but we have seen many sightings since then." Reeve said. "So which one of these creatures killed my father?" Seth asked. "We don't know." Reeve said. "Did you guys kill this Gojira thing?" Seth asked. "The Japanese army said they did but we don't know." Reeve said.
One of the soldiers walked in and said "Sir you might want to hear this." "Let's go." Reeve said. When they got to the radio room, everyone was gathered around listing to the same sound over and over again. It was saying "Help!" Then they heard the roar of the creature from 1998. "Ok men we need to kill this thing before the world finds out there is another monster on the loose." Reeve said. "I thought you said your men killed thing in 1998." Seth said. "We did. It must be family."
The soldiers went out to the New York bay. "Ok men if you see anything, put as many holes in it as possible in it." Reeve said to the pilots. "Got it." One of them sent back. A few minutes later, they noticed strange movements in the water. They started shooting all of their missiles and bullets into the water. The movement stopped. "I think we got it heading back sir." "Good job." Reeve said. When they started moving back to the bay, they heard something. They looked back. They were looking around. "See anything?" "No." "Must have been our imaginations." Then all of a sudden, The creature from 1998 jumped out of the water and bit down one of the jets. "Oh sh..!" The creature got the other jet. It walked onto the New York bay. It gave a mighty roar. It started walking through the city. The news got on it right away and when the army was alarmed, they sent out soldiers to go fight it. The creature headed towards the Empire State Building. When the army got there, the creature was going in that direction. The creature got to the army. "Hold your fire." The creature got closer. "FIRE!!" They started shooting it. It start walking towards them while taking bullets and rockets. Reeve yelled "Keep firing!" The creature gave a roar, then walked on all the tanks. They all got destroyed and all the men died. The creature saw Reeve and walk over to him. It stared at him. Reeve pulled out a pistol and started firing. Then the creature bit Reeve in half. Then the creature ate both ends and headed towards the Empire State Building. The news started calling the creature Zilla. Zilla made it to the Empire State Building and kept roaring.
Seth was watching it on the news. "I remember you. You're the creature that killed my dad. Now your here again." Seth noticed it to be a bit weird to be roaring over and over again. "Wait, it's.. Calling something." There were soldiers on the bay watching the water. They were noticing weird movements in the water. Then they saw spikes coming. It started getting closer. When it got close enough they started firing. The creature stood up and huge gushes of water came off and blinded the soldiers. Then it stepped up on the bay and its foot washed away the whole bay of soldiers. One of the soldiers survived and looked up and saw a tail heading into the city. "Sir, there's something coming." Zilla was still roaring. Jets flew towards him and started firing. It was not doing any damage to the creature. Zilla climbed a few feet up the building. He jumped off the building and jumped on one of the jets. The jet exploded into pieces. Zilla grad a piece with his mouth and threw it at the other jet and it crashed. Bam! A foot came crashing down. Zilla turned around and gave a mighty roar. Bam! Another foot came crashing down. The smoke started clearing. You could see the legs, then the body, then the chest. Then when all the smoke was cleared the creature gave a powerful roar back. "That's Gojira! That's Godzilla!" One of the scientist said. The two animals started to walk towards each other. Zilla jumped at Godzilla.
Zilla bit Godzilla's arm and hung on. Godzilla bit it's neck. Then Zilla got loose of Godzilla's grip and ran and jumped on Godzilla's back. Zilla then bit the back of Godzilla's neck. Godzilla tried to get him off. Godzilla walked backwards through a building and fell. Zilla jumped off and started brutally biting Godzilla's neck over and over again. More jets came and shot Zilla. Zilla roared at them and let Godzilla go. They came back around and Zilla couldn't get them because they went too fast. Zilla went back to biting Godzilla. Then when the jets came back around, Zilla threw his tail in the air and it hit one of the jets. The jet hit the other jet and they both went down. Zilla gave a roar and went to bite Godzilla again. Godzilla grabbed Zilla and flipped him on his back. Godzilla tried to stand back up. Zilla got up to fast for Godzilla and he tackled Godzilla back down. He started stomping Godzilla. Godzilla turned over on his belly. Zilla started scratching him. Godzilla smacked him with his tail and got back up. Zilla tried to jump on him. Godzilla smacked him with his tail in mid-air. Zilla flew and went threw the Empire State Building. Zilla started crawling, but the Empire State Building fell on top of him. He push the debris off him and got up. He looked around but there was to much smoke. Zilla was looking around then a tail flew up behind him. Blue lights started going up the tail. Zilla turned around and saw one spike after another lighting up something then you could see a blue light inside a mouth. Then you could see Godzilla face. He cocked his head back then shot blue Atomic Breath.
The army was making a plan, when Seth walked in. "Guys I think Zilla was calling something." Seth said. "Yea, he was calling Godzilla" "No, I'm not any scientist but I don't think he was calling Godzilla. I think he was calling something else and Godzilla just heard." Seth said. "Maybe a ancient enemy." One of the scientist said.
Zilla dug a hole in the ground and Godzilla fell in. Zilla came back out of the ground and roared. Godzilla started climbing back up. Zilla spikes started glowing green. When Godzilla stood back up, he turn around Zilla started shooting green Atomic Breath. Godzilla fell down, Zilla ran over and bit him again. Godzilla had a hole in his chest from the atomic blast. Zilla start scratching at his chest. More tanks came over and started shooting Zilla. Zilla spikes started glowing and then he blew all the tanks up. Zilla turn around and Godzilla started limping towards Zilla. Zilla roar at him then Godzilla hit Zilla's bottom jaw so hard, it broke off his face. Zilla stood there with no bottom jaw. Than Godzilla's spikes glowed brightly, and he shot Atomic Breath into Zilla's mouth and Zilla's head fell off. Godzilla roared. Than limped back to the ocean and swam away.
Chunks of Godzilla flesh was on the ground. They started testing it. Scientist figure out something. They went to the army and told them Godzilla was dying. Then they said this was they think this is the last animal of its kind. The army said they needed to kill it. Once they started testing Zilla's corpse they found out he was dying too. They thought it was interesting that both of them are dying. They didn't know what was causing it. They couldn't find a disease.
"We must keep you in close eyes." "Ok." Seth said. Seth went home and took a rest. He started having a nightmare about his parents. Then he saw a light. Then he saw the Godzilla creature dying. He woke up and turn on the news. One of the channels was talking about the battle's aftermath. He changed the channel and it says that fish have been popping up dead in the ocean. It says scientists are still trying to figure out why millions of fish are dying everyday.
The next night, an American submarine went underwater. "You guys see that?" "Yea." "Why is it not moving?" "I don't know. Let's try to contact them." The pilot sends out a message. "It didn't respond." "It just started moving!" "It's heading towards us!" "Shoot it!" They shoot it. It stops. "We got it." "It's coming again!" "It's sending radio waves!" They start puking. "Why did we all just get sick?" "I don't know." Then the creature swam right through them, and they died.
14 hours later, the news is talking about how the army lost contact with an American submarine and how every rescue ship never came back. "Godzilla need to die. We need to make something to kill him." One of the scientists walked in the room. "We could use something that destroys oxygen. Like an Oxygen Destroyer" "Though, how will we make that?" A soldier says. "I don't know but we have to try."
All the soldiers gather on the bay watching out for Godzilla. They start picking up radiation waves. "GET READY EVERY ONE!" Once they got in position, they waited and waited. Then they saw spikes coming towards them. "Hold it!" Godzilla got by the bay then rose up. He started walking towards the bay. "FIRE!" They all started shooting their missiles and bullets. Godzilla still was scared in the chest from his fight with Zilla. When the rockets and bullets started hitting his chest, he let out a painful cry. They kept firing. Godzilla's tail started lighting up, and it started going up his back. Godzilla cocked his head back, then bent over and wiped out the whole bay with his Atomic Breath. Godzilla started marching through the city. It seems like he is heading towards something. He is walking through buildings like they are part of this environment. They notice Godzilla is heading towards a power plant. They evacuate the power plant once they find out. Godzilla is almost there when he stops and turns around and roars at something. He starts heading towards the ocean. Everyone starts looking at the sea and there is a row of spikes that look very similar to Godzilla's that are heading towards the city. Godzilla gets to the bay and freezes. The spikes go underwater. Godzilla roars again then a creature jumps out of the water and lands on Godzilla and knocks him over.
The army sends Seth to the news station to report the fight. They are recording the fight. Seth gets a mic and stares at the TV and starts talking. "What your are watching right now is truly happening. Godzilla is fighting a strange creature right now. It looks like a centipede but with a row of spikes that looks a lot like Godzilla's spikes. It is a white-ish gray-ish color. It has a head kinda like a bird but a mouth of a Japanese hornet. It's roar is like a lion's roar but longer and higher-pitched. We are about to watch something amazing."
The creature bit Godzilla in the leg. Godzilla picked it up and threw it at a building. The creature hit the sharp corner of the building. The creature jumped after Godzilla. Godzilla caught him and threw him on the ground. Godzilla was about to step on his head when the creature tripped Godzilla. The creature then ran behind a building. Godzilla got up and went to search for it. Godzilla stood by a building when the creature jumped through it and put one of his spikes threw Godzilla's chest. Godzilla screams in pain then Godzilla bites him. The creature screams in pain. The creature gets out then Godzilla shoots his Atomic Breath at the creature. The monster was screaming in pain. Godzilla wouldn't stop shooting his breath. Pink lighting shocks started going up his back. All three of the creatures spikes were pink at the top. Godzilla was still shooting. Then the pink at the stop went down his back fast and hit the ground. All of an sudden Godzilla fell down and puked. The creature start biting him.
"What was that attack?" "I don't know but it looked like it made Godzilla sick." The army soldiers were talking. "That's what's making all the fish dying." "What?" "That's why Godzilla is dying.""Your right." A scientist said."Did you guys finish the oxygen destroyer?""Yes. We will need someone to go in the water and use it." Seth just got back from his news cast. "I will."
Godzilla is getting beat. The creature roars and goes to bite Godzilla again, then Godzilla grabs the creature's head and stands up. He snaps the creature neck then rips it's jaw open and shoots fire breath down it. Godzilla roars and starts to head to the power plant. Then, he hears something. He turns around to see the creature is getting back up. It's legs fall off of its body and it grows it's head back. He grows 4 legs that have bird toes. It grows arms and his spikes get bigger. It body starts to look a little more like Godzilla's. Godzilla gives a roar but when the creature roars, it's roar is now a lot deeper. Godzilla walks towards it, but The creature hits Godzilla with 2 of his big legs. Godzilla started to fall towards the power plant. The creature picks up Godzilla and throws him in to the power plant. The whole power plant blows up. The monster roars thinking it's killed Godzilla. But then all the flame start to go down. Godzilla is sucking up all the radiation. Then his spikes light up blue his body starts flashing red. His spikes turn red, then he cocked his head back, then shot Red Atomic Breath. The Red Atomic Breath went directly through the creature. Godzilla took a rest but the creature started going through his final form. The hole in the creature's body healed and he lifted up his arms and he got wings under his arms. The wings were connected to his arms. Godzilla roar with all the breath he had left. But the creature flew over and grab Godzilla with its 4 legs and flew Godzilla back towards the ocean. But he kept dropping Godzilla trough building then he lifted Godzilla above the ocean and flew up to the clouds then dropped Godzilla into the water.
"Sir, do you got a code name for this 4 legged thing?" "This creature adds death to his surrounding. This creature has killed more than one submarine full of people with family's. It's killing tons of fish. And it's now killing an animal named Godzilla. This thing of death. Codename.... Shinigami." Soldiers walk in. "Sir, we're ready to ship the load." "Then go." They pack up the oxygen destroyer and Seth gets ready to go. They make their way to the ship.
Shinigami knocks Godzilla over in the water. Then he breaks open a volcano. Shinigami tries to throw Godzilla in it. Godzilla stood up, and smacked Shinigami with his tail. Shinigami fell into the volcano. Godzilla falls down. He takes about a minute resting, then he hears Shinigami. Shinigami emerged out of the volcano bleeding and one of his legs melted off. He charges at Godzilla. Godzilla makes his last stand. He grabs one of Shinigami's jaws and rips it off. Shinigami screams then goes for his attack that is causing everything to die. As he is about to do it Godzilla shoots him with his Atomic Breath. Shinigami falls over. Godzilla knows he is about to die. When Shinigami goes to get up, Godzilla shoots him with his Atomic Breath again. Shinigami falls over. Godzilla shoots his Atomic Breath again and shoots 2 of his legs off so Shinigami can't walk anymore. Godzilla knows he can't let Shinigami be able to get away. He blasts a hole in Shinigami's wing. Godzilla knows this will be the final move he will ever make. Godzilla packs all of his radiation into one blast. He shoots Red Atomic Breath and it puts a hole in Shinigami's body. At that moment Godzilla's heart exploded. He fell down and died. Shinigami was still laying there.
"Ok Seth you remember how to activate it?" "Yea." Seth said. "You ready to jump?" "Ready as I'll ever be." Seth said. Seth jumped into the water with the oxygen destroyer. He went down until he saw Godzilla just laying there not moving. "Your what killed my mother and now your going to die. I've lived in a foster home and was bullied my whole life. My son was just born and he will one day find out he is an accident. I haven't seen his mother in years. I don't even know his name and what he looks like all I know is he was born. I'm starting to think its time for me to leave this planet." He set the oxygen destroyer down then cut his rope so they couldn't pull him back up. When they pulled the rope up, they saw it was cut. He sat down and started humming. Then he heard Shinigami's roar. He stood up and looked around. He didn't see Shinigami anywhere. Then he turned around and Shinigami jumped at him on one leg. Shinigami tried to eat Seth. Seth jumped out of the way. Shinigami started crawling at him. Seth climbed into a cave. Shinigami sat up. Seth saw the oxygen destroyer was about to go off. "Goodbye." Seth said. Shinigami jumped at Seth to kill him. As soon as Shinigami did, the oxygen destroyer went off. Seth turned into dust. Shinigami started choking. Then he roared. He then turned into bone which turned into dust. Godzilla's corpse turned into dust.
They put on the news the monsters are dead. They said a man named Seth Gibbs died to save the world. Scarlett Myers was watching. "You hear that. Your daddy died to save the world from those mean old monsters." Saying that to her son, Mason Myers.
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

Duratok
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 6:07 PMPlease separate these into multiple paragraphs. It's rather painful to look at right now.

GG
MemberGiganJun-20-2014 7:14 PMI was gonna write i review for this. and i did that twice but both times my computer lagged out and it never went through. i might write it again if my computer works. anyways i rated it a 2/10 for horrible story telling, Horrible Character, and herrendous fight scenes, and 8 year old level grammar. For one of the most hyped books on this website it was one of the worst rough drafts i have ever read. And explain to me why Godzilla was weaker than he was in, Godzilla vs the smog monster.
I will try to my review out.
Good grief.

Duratok
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 7:41 PMUnfortunately that's what happens when something gets hyped so hard, expectations increase exponentially.
That being said, go easy on them, GorillaGodzilla. Chances are they're incredibly young, and this is their first attempt at creative writing.

gojifan02
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 7:43 PM@gorillagodzilla77897,
Don't forget this is only a rought draft. I bet there was A LOT of revising ahead!!!!!
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GG
MemberGiganJun-20-2014 8:07 PMYeah the review is to long to the point where my computer just doesnt do it but here is the thing i hate the most.
Why the hell, Does Seth Douche bag tell a dying godzilla that, "wait till he finds out he is an accident, I havent seen his mother in a while, I dont even know his name or what he looks like, all i know is he was born" Why the hell would you tell that to Godzilla? I dont think Godzilla gives anycare to, Seth Fricking gibbs. Its the worst line in anything i have ever read, An the best line in the whole book is, "we just puked guys i think we are sick" I fell on the floor laughing nervously out of hwo bad it is. I know its a rough draft but its the worst rough draft i have ever heard. And this book was so overly hyped, Its been hyped since early march. And i was expecting it to be really good actually, But wow im downgrading it.
its a 1/10. This is what happend when things are over hyped.
Good grief.

GG
MemberGiganJun-20-2014 8:11 PMAlso isnt it illegal for your boss to, Randomly knock you out and and handcuff you from behind? Woudlnt anyone have noticed that? And why was, "Seth Gibbs" Boss a Millitary guy Somehow watching texts? No explanation for that. If your in the millitary wouldnt you be following the law? Not randomly hitting your employees and handcuffing them, and then interrogating them on something that may or may not be true.
Good grief.

GG
MemberGiganJun-20-2014 8:20 PMSorry the only way my computer will work is if i post in small sections.
Why did they make Zilla so damn overpowered? Zilla never shot atomic breath? And Godzilla is 367 feet, "Knowing this book they probably put everything to the extreme" and Zilla is only 80 feet. So explain to me how Zilla knocked over Godzilla? and then proceeded to take a atomic breath to the face?? and survive, That already runied the book for me. Its the worse crap i have ever seen. And then on of the most overused names in history, "Shinigami" Comes in and uses some kind of unexplained death beam? what the hell!!! So this death beam kills humans and fish btu he has to shoot it from his mouth? And it works some how? And in the final battle, Even thought the beam didnt hit Godzilla he randomly still died? Thats some of the worse unexplained garbage i have ever hear. Worse than my new meme, "Man you done Seth Gibbs it up" Say that to people you hate. Shinigami should have just been, Destroyah, that would have been more intresting. They were basically the same thing anyway. So this, "Shinitroyah" Thing is able to defy the world and lift a 90,000 Ton animal above the clouds? I am about to just quit lol. They made Godzilla so weak that his Red atomic breath, "Which is actually a spiral ray" Didnt even kill anything?? Also obviously Godzillas atomic breath didnt damage Zilla but zillas one sure did. And then Godzilla randomly dies from using his atomic breath. Because Shinitroyahs Beam sure didnt hit him,
1/10 the only good scene in it is, "Seth turned to dust" I enarly died form laughter.
Good grief.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

GojiraTheGojiraSaurus
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:13 PMBravo! I loved it, a lot better than my godzilla stories 10/10.
GORILLAGODZILLA77897 You Suck. Stop bullying people for not having blockbuster expectations. You are fat little nerd sitting on couch. Go away to some other planet. This was absolutley epic. P.S. The only thing you need to change is the last part "mean old monsters" That was Hysterical. However i am so impressed you did a great job.

High FLYERS Tag Team
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:34 PMZilla Jr. Bitch. The attack also Attacks radiation so godzilla was dying because of the attack so he overused his radiation and we'll died. Seth said one thing to godzilla then started talking to hiself. Seth didn't get hit by his boss, he got hit from behind dumbass. He was staring at his boss when it happened. Quit twisting the story dick it didn't say "we just puked I think we're sick." no it say "Why did we just get sick?". I was trying to make it where the army can read everyone text because for all we know they can and they drove to his work site ha got ya, Seth say army vehicles parked outside his work place. When was the last time Shinigami was used in a Gamera film. Also Shinigami attack wasn't a beam. If you got any more retarded questions they will probaly be anwser in the next story. And one more time.
ZILLA JR. BITCH!!!
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

High FLYERS Tag Team
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:37 PMalso this wasnt over hype. All me and IamGojira put was a few posters,trailers, and sneak peeks. So no it wasn't overhyped
ZILLA JR. BITCH!!!!!!
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

gojifan02
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:42 PMum high FLYERS tag team? is that zilla junior thing ur signature??
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High FLYERS Tag Team
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:48 PMNo it's my new outro :)
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

gojifan02
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:50 PMoh, just go to ur setting and make that ur outro/signature
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High FLYERS Tag Team
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:56 PMI know I'm joking but in all seriousness he doesn't know who Zilla jr. Is. Also I know you've been fooling it today. Did you like it
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

**Al**
Community ExecutiveMemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:57 PMOne of the thing we are proud about this forums is that we are respectful with the other, opinions are always welcome, and also critics when it comes about fan works, but even when is not needed all the critics are positive, I think the best you can do is help to build, here at the forums all the member got an space to their fan works, is really sad that at this point I need to ask to somebody to be respectful, when I thought we were in a friendly environment, but I have to do it, and I hope I don't have to come to this thread again, somebody is showing us his work, so at least you can show manners.
If for some reason you guys want to avoid my advices and I have to close this thread, I will ask to the writer to post it again; with this in mind let start to help with the comments about what we like and what we don't like, but using a proper language and tone.
And to the author of this thread and to others,
CURSES are not needed or appreciated by the readers, if this keep going I will regret about the support I've offered above.
The world will spin well past our last breath, but I will always care about you

Duratok
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 9:59 PMI'm sorry, but it's true, it was definitely over-hyped. You created numerous threads over the course of several weeks campaigning and advertising for your Godzilla: Extinction short story. It seemed like every single day you guys released something new for it. You may not realize you were generating hype for this, but you were.

gojifan02
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 10:00 PMwait High FLYERS tag team, do u mean me about zilla Jr?
RESPECT THE GOLDEN MIRU

High FLYERS Tag Team
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 10:17 PMNo it was some post to say following not fooling.
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

High FLYERS Tag Team
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-20-2014 10:18 PMDuratok- I'm sorry if it was hyped. I was just trying to post fun little things. I wasn't trying to hype it I was just having fun :)
There are strong men and weak men. The strong ones are here to keep the weak ones up when ever they fail.

GG
MemberGiganJun-21-2014 7:08 AMFlyers. Dont start throwing names around. it makes your story look worse, If its made by a immature 10 year old. Alright if your, "Seth Gibbs" Character isnt a psycho, Explain to me, "I havent seen his mother in years, i dont know what he looks like or even his name, All i know is he was born" Why would you tell that to a dying animal? I dont think he really cares about, "Seth gibbs." You should take my constructive critisisim as a complement for better writeing. Also explain to me, "Its sending us radio waves" They started puking. There is no explanation for anything, Why is this Shinitroyah thing, "If you read my previous posts you would know where thats from" Killing fish and humans? Its scientifically proven that a fish born disease cant effect Mammals. He got hit from behind.... But his boss still planned the attack. This book is made up of psycho paths. I was really expecting a good book especially with the overhyping that was going on but, Wow, its even worse now that the writer is acting like a immature kid. This book is the worst rough draft of all rough drafts. Seth Gibbs is the new troll who talks to dying GODZILLAs. The best part of the turd nugget is when Gibbs turned to dust, I nearly died from laughter. Also explain to me how, "Seth ******* Gibbs" is the only one who can jump out of the airplane? Why not a millitary guy what the hell. Its the most cliche thing ever, If you wore gonna overhype the crap out of this thing you should have made a good book, Not, "i think we are sick! Also how does a earthquake effect a airplane? and how does Shinigami lift 90,000 tonned animals above the clouds? And why is Godzilla so weak that he got owned by Zilla. Answer me this, And if its Zilla jr why didnt you say Zilla jr in the damn draft! Now i end this post with these famous lines, "I have lived in a foster home for years, i have been bullied my whole life, my son was just born. Wait till he finds out he is an accident, i havent seen his mother in years, i dont even know his name or what he looks like all i know is he was born." ........Douche.....Bag..... Also explain to me how Zilla, ""JUUUUUUNNNIIOOOORRR" Takes Godzilla's atomic breath to the face?
Good grief.