
Quadraxis7
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-09-2015 9:41 AMI've wanted to contribute to the wonderful community here for a while, so I've decided to share this rap I wrote with you all. Thoughts and criticism are appreciated.
Here he is
Godzilla's here to stay
He's the god of monsters
And he's here to make your day
What's a king to a god?
You can call him The Wall
You can try to knock him down
But you're the one who's gonna fall
The Destroyer of Worlds
You should fear his atomic breath
He's the balancer of nature
He is the bringer of death
Born from the destruction
Caused by the atomic blast
Better turn that ship around
And hide behind that mast
The Atomic Bomb brought to life
Filled with rage at nature's strife
Rising from the deep dark ocean
Causing all kinds of commotion
Godzilla destroys our cities and towns
Breaking down the lives that we found
Godzilla teaches us what must be taught
Showing humanity just what we have wrought
With every single step
He causes earthquakes
And with every roar
You can feel the earth shake
With his very presence
Will the heavens start to break
A brand new world order
Is what Godzilla will create
And once nature is finally calm
Godzilla's infinite rage will fade
And he'll pass that swaying palm
Into the waters from which he rose
Handing the torch back to humanity
Waiting until he's needed again
And then he'll be back stronger than before
And he'll rage across the world once more
The Atomic Bomb brought to life
Filled with rage at nature's strife
Rising from the deep dark ocean
Causing all kinds of commotion
Godzilla destroys our cities and towns
Breaking down the lives that we found
Godzilla teaches us what must be taught
Showing humanity just what we have wrought

Sci-Fi King25
MemberGiganJun-09-2015 4:17 PMSomeone get this man on the radio!
Welcome to Scified BTW! :) I really enjoyed your rap. Just add a beat and some music and become a small internet star.
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster

Quadraxis7
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-09-2015 5:07 PMNow I'm not sure it's that good, but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless! Thanks! I'm really enjoying being here so far. :)

Something Real
MemberGodzillaJun-09-2015 7:45 PMQUADRAXIS7 - Welcome to SCIFIED! It is always quite agreeable to see new faces! You have demonstrated excellent aptitude with regards to lyrical composition in the form of what is known as "Rap"! From what I have read, your technique is very well developed! Thank you so much for creating this and choosing to share it with us! Once again, welcome to SCIFIED! :)

Dinozilla0439
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-09-2015 8:23 PMGotta say, this is pretty good. XD Great job!
And, also, welcome to Scified!

NateZilla10000
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-10-2015 12:43 AMI don't usually like rap.
But I like this. I really like this.
Well done, sir.

Quadraxis7
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-10-2015 10:07 AMThanks for the warm welcome! I appreciate it a lot. That image of Godzilla clapping is wonderful.