I Have 11 Chapters of My Godzilla Story Done... Feedback?

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dalek8

MemberMothra LarvaeOctober 07, 20141510 Views5 Replies

This is a sort of sequel to Godzilla 2000 (although I have re-written some things to make it better fit this universe) It is a cast of new characters with re-imaginings of Hedorah, Biollante and MechaGodzilla :) I decided to do a character centric story, but I won't hide Godzilla or anything. I just want some feedback (specifically if the story is decent right now)

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GGOctober 07, 2014

On chapter 12, you mispelled Iceberg at the end.

Good grief.

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dalek8October 07, 2014

Common mistake, sorry bout that :D

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dalek8October 07, 2014

Wait which chapter? There are only 11 chapters, and on chapter 10 I did it right?

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GGOctober 07, 2014

sorry i meant 11!

Good story however, looking forward to the whole thing.

Good grief.

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dalek8October 07, 2014

Thanks! It's ok dude, we all make mistakes (hence my spelling mistake XP)

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