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MemberGiganSep-06-2014 5:09 PMThe male MUTO swooped down and snatched one of the Mothra larvae in his hooked hands. He then flew away, but Fire Rodan flew after him. Once he got in close enough, he used his Uranium Hear Beam, but the MUTO was too agile. Finally, Fire Rodan flew upwards, and was able to land a good hit onto the MUTO’s back. The ancient parasite screeched in pain and surprise and dropped the Mothra larvae. Fire Rodan swopped down and grabbed the Mothra larva in his talons. He flew back towards the group, and gently set her down into the ocean. Soon, Godzilla roared, and was looking at the sky. He was staring at a large, unfamiliar ship hovering in the air. Eventually, they continued their journey to Hawaii.
Once the five reached Honolulu, they marched towards the center of the city, where they saw their next opponent. It was large and green, but its stomach area glowed orange. It was Biollante. She roared at the five, and approached them. She snapped her flytrap-like arms at them, but they didn’t back down. Finally, she lunged forward at Godzilla, biting his neck with her crocodilian head and nipping his arms and spines with her arms. Godzilla attempted to free himself, but it didn’t work. However, the Mothra larvae sprayed their silk while Angirius bit and scratched her. Eventually, she let go and stepped back. She sprayed a ray of corrosive acid at the group, but just in time, something intercepted the blast and sent it back at her. It was King Caesar.
Biollante roared in pain as she was melted by her own acid. After that, Godzilla fired his Atomic Breath at Biollante’s “womb”, while Fire Rodan fired at her head. Eventually, the creature exploded, and the monsters moved on. They shook themselves clear of the remnants of Biollante, and walked off. However, it wasn’t long before they met their next opponent: the female MUTO.
The creature slammed one of her limbs onto the ground, causing a citywide EMP. Godzilla’s Atomic Breath was affected by the attack, but he could still fight. Fire Rodan swopped in and slashed and pecked the creature. The Mothra larvae sprayed silk at the monster, but soon one was crushed by something. It was Chainsaw Gigan.
The cyborg screeched, and fired his Titanium Disks at Fire Rodan. The agile creature avoided the attack, and he redirected them at the MUTO. They hit her, and she screeched in pain. Chainsaw Gigan fired its eye beam at Fire Rodan, but King Caesar redirected the blast at the MUTO. The creature screeched in pain, and Fire Rodan fired his Uranium Heat Beam into the MUTO’s mouth, killing it. Chainsaw Gigan screeched, and King Caesar attacked it. However, Chainsaw Gigan cut him with its chainsaws, and then cut him with his buzzsaw abdomen. King Caesar fell to the ground as Gigan fired one last eye beam attack. Godzilla fired his Atomic Blast at one of Chainsaw Gigan’s arms, blowing it off. The alien cyborg flew off, and the group walked off. However, they were confronted by one more creature.
The creature divebombed the group, attacking them. It was Destoroyah. However, he was killed earlier, but enough members survived to create a flying form. It bit and slashed them. Fire Rodan fired his Uranium Heat Beam as Destoroyah fired his Oxygen Destroyer Beam. The two beams collided, causing a mini-explosion. He fired the beam at Fire Rodan, sending him to the ground. After this, Angirius rolled into a ball and threw himself at Destoroyah. The two collided, sending Destoroyah to the ground. Then, Godzilla stomped on his chest and fired his Atomic Breath. He killed Destoroyah with the attack, and then he went to Fire Rodan’s aid. He screeched weakly, but slowly got up. The creatures would have to journey to the Gulf of Mexico to finish this. The three went into the ocean, ready for battle.
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster

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MemberGiganSep-06-2014 5:16 PMUm, i feel like this is ending to quickly.
Also on the fight scenes, instead of rushing to stuff all the monsters in one episode, focus more on the fight with that monster, like with Biollante, Godzilla could have bitten and pushed her into things and anguiurs and Rodancould have done alot more.
Also Godzilla 2014s Atomic breath was kind of a last resort move. He doesnt just use it every fight he has, so focus more on the melee aspect of Godzilla.
Also with the Male and Female Muto, Godzilla would have charged both of them, also Godzial 2014 wouldnt be letting these Monsters get away, so make sure in tomorrows episode that Godzilla and friends kills every monster they fight, because 2014 is a ferocious being, and he wouldnt let any imbalances escape his wrath.
My rating for this chapter, 7/10. Good and bad, but the way you write your storys is still phenomanel and im looking forward to tomorrow. But take my words into account to make a much better episode.
Good grief.

Sci-Fi King25
MemberGiganSep-06-2014 5:21 PM^ Thanks for the advice! I didn't rerally have much ideas while writing this fight, so tomorrow's will be much better!
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster