Gojira2K
MemberMothra LarvaeAug-19-2014 10:26 AMSorry for the wait on this one. This is a bit short. Hope you like it.
After she woke up, she decided to explore her new territory. She went over to the Reactor to fuel herself. Then she set off. She decided to go see if there were any game trails nearby, but there weren’t any. She saw that there was a lake on one side of her territory, surrounded by trees.
A group of Shinomura’s flew by. She was ready to fight, but they just ignored her. She was hungry again, so she went hunting. She saw a Kishou Dorogan and decided to go after it. It was resting on a tree, on the other side of the lake. She carefully dove under the water and headed towards the other side of the lake.
As she neared the other side of the lake, the Kishou Dorogan noticed the ripples caused by her tail moving in the water. It went off the tree and inched closer to the water. Just as it reached the edge, Kijura burst out of the water and grabbed it. She pulled under and water started to drown it. It escaped from her grasp and got back out of the water. Kijura followed it and got out again. She turned around and tried to hit it with her tail. She missed and it flew at her. It wrapped around her, and tried to strangle her.
Kijura used her claws and gashed it. It unwrapped around her and flew around her. It flew around to her front and sent a blast of cold air and covered her with frost. She decided to live it alone and returned to the Reactor. She recharged and went to find something else to eat.
Mental note, don’t try and attack Kishou Dorogan’s until you learn how to use your Breath.
Next chapter will be posted Thursday.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
GG
MemberGiganAug-19-2014 10:50 AMVery good but another fatal flaw.
Im not sure that Gojiras eat, they mainly would absorb radiation as there food! But i guess you can always ad a good hunt and eat but you have to describe it well in the next chapter.
Rating 7/10
To short to be bad, to short to be amazing still very good though.
Good grief.
Huge-Ben
MemberBaragonAug-19-2014 1:17 PM@gojira2k,
Looking good still buddy. ;)
Need my help furthur down the road just give me a heads up. :)
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Gojira2K
MemberMothra LarvaeAug-19-2014 3:21 PMThanks guys. BigBadBen, I definitely will. Gorilla, I'm not sure they do either, but I decided for them to eat in my story. In Godzilla: Awakening, the Shinomuras eat, so I thought why not Gojiras.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Sci-Fi King25
MemberGiganAug-19-2014 6:50 PMNice chapter Gojira2K!
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