
Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusAug-01-2014 11:25 AMPLEASE CHECK THIS BEFORE READING
-What the hell just happened- says Ford, recovering from suddenly being thrown around along with the others
-We need to look outside- says Serizawa
One of the soldiers looks outside
-We are on a beach, probably Hong Kong but it looks different -says the soldier
- Let me see- says Serizawa- What the hell is going on??? The sign on that billboard says 2026-
- Wait... are you saying...we time travelled- says Ford
-Yes, we did- says Serizawa
Ford climbs out immediately.
- Holy Mother- says Ford- come on you have to see this
Ford helps everyone out.
- My God [zilla ;)]- says Serizawa, staring at Godzilla staring down a brute of a kaiju, briefly exchanging roars in Hong Kong with Minya frozen in fear, naturally hiding behind his father.
Minya spots Serizawa, to whom Minya sees as "uncle". Godzilla senses the tension in Minya and realising his human friends are here, signals Minya to get to safety. Minya runs as fast as he can to the humans. Godzilla sees that Tackler is starting to mock charge, but realising that Godzilla isnt afraid of anything, Tackler charges, running full force with huge arms swinging and powerful legs shaking.
-WHAT THE HELL SHOULD WE DO!!!???- screams Joe impatiently.
- Dammit Joe, Let Them Fig...- replies Josh only to be cut off by his brother
- WHY?!?! - replies Joe
-Because they're different... one seems to be more stable, it doesnt seem to have kaiju blue and its fighting the other one, it can do our damn job for us- says Raleigh
Godzilla wasnt use to fighting these type of kaiju, he has faced Giant Moths, Three Headed Dragons, hell even a giant plant/crocodile/Godzilla/human abomination but has never encountered something quite like this before. All he seems to figure out is that it aint natural in a single way. Tackler then starts to charge. Godzilla prepares for the onslaught, Godzilla using his intelligence side steps and dodges Tackler. Tackler infuriated now like a raging bull, decides to just swing his massive arm at Godzilla. Godzilla catches his arm and catches the other arm when it swings it. Tackler tries to push Godzilla, but cant at all, Godzilla then starts pushing Tackler with relative ease, a reminiscent of Godzilla pushing the Femuto. Godzilla then bites Tackler neck but Tackler lets go and manages to get free.
Godzilla is at ease with this battle but Tackler is quite shocked at the power of this kaiju. Tackler charges again at Godzilla only to get a right, 34 foot hand nearly shattering his jaw, Tackler now severely dizzy, is picked up by Godzilla with ease and thrown a good 120 ft [40 yards] back.
-Blash di kapen goputs (What the hell is happening) says the Commading Precursor
[THEIR SPEECH WILL NOW BE TRANSLATED TO ENGLISH AND NO OFFENSE TO GERMANS ABOUT MY CHOICE OF PRECURSOR LANGUAGE]
-Why isnt Tackler doing any damage-
-Thus Kaiju is too strong his level is.........
-What???- says the Commander impatiently
-He is too strong, It cant read it, my best guesses are Category 17, Sir- says another Precursor
-How is this other one picking up our one with ease- says the Commander
-All our Kaiju are silicon-based, thats why they are lighter- says the Precursor
-Send out Buruto, Chirashi and Supidi.-
So whatcha think, ill tell you who Buruto, Chirashi and Supidi are, as you know probably kaiju. Thanks anyway for reading, pray for Chapter 2 coming out soon

GG
MemberGiganAug-01-2014 11:50 AMThis chapter 1 is good but highly flawed. First of all it is purely fanfiction to have ford and serizawa together, they only met once in the whole movie they wouldnt form a bond that close. Also how did they time travel? it wasnt explained. Im not sure if that was Joe brody but if it was.
Also admiral stenz wouldnt be there either. For fanfics you have to make up new characters because its purely lazy wrighting to have the same characters from the first film magically all meet up. Also how did Godzilla fight Biollante?
Chapter 1 rating
4/10 you can do much better if you change the characters.
Good grief.

Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusAug-01-2014 12:20 PM@GorillaGodzilla77897
If you checked out that link, all your problems would've been solved.
You were just too lazy to check it.
BTW, this takes place After Godzilla 3, duh???

GG
MemberGiganAug-01-2014 12:25 PMAlso Godzilla doesnt know who the heck Ford ad serizawa are, he wouldnt think of them as his human friends thats fanfiction at its worst. Also you said this begins in 2017 xD i dont think anythings happening by then.
Good grief.

Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusAug-01-2014 12:27 PMFord would want to check up on Godzilla, after the battle with Ghidorah, you know the writer cant give the reader EVERYTHING. Somethings arent explained so that you can use your imagination Gorilla. Since this is after G2 and even 3, we dont know what will happen then, Ford and Serizawa might become a little closer, and other things could happen too WITH you using your imagination, unless you want me to give a Godzila 2 and 3 script too because you cant use your imagination, even if you do have it. Im also removing Stenz, FOR FUN!!!!!!

Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusAug-01-2014 12:29 PM"Human Friends"... does that talk about Serizawa and Ford personally, NO!!! I might as well write everything else that happened between this, and alot can happen in 3 years.

Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusAug-01-2014 12:31 PMMINILLA is the one with human friends, yet again YOU cant use your imagination on how he thinks of them as friends, maybe Serizawa hatched Minilla at Monarch HQ.

Carnosaur
MemberMothra LarvaeAug-01-2014 1:12 PMFirst of all it is purely fanfiction to have ford and serizawa together, they only met once in the whole movie they wouldnt form a bond that close
Apparently you didn't read the title either, "Chapter 1 of my Godzilla vs Pacific Rim fanfic" Makes that pretty obvious that it's a fan fiction right? It's his story, let him do what he wants with it.
Good job man, looking forward to the next.
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.

Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusAug-01-2014 1:42 PM@Carnosaur
Thanks man, i appreciate criticism, but i often begin to get angry when someone has a bad tone and doesnt read properly and pay attention to detail

Huge-Ben
MemberBaragonAug-01-2014 1:56 PM@gorillagodzilla,
They just take it in the wrong way. ;)
http://hugeben.deviantart.com/ check out my gallery of Godzilla artwork! Follow me on Twitter@thebigbadben90.

GG
MemberGiganAug-01-2014 1:56 PMWhy would ford want to check up on Godzilla? He never seemed to care about him that much! Also Humans to Godzilla is like Humans to ants, i dont think your gonna befriend an ant and try to protect it lol. But i mean what im saying in a nice way.
Good grief.

Huge-Ben
MemberBaragonAug-01-2014 1:58 PMHey gorillagodzilla my new artwork is up. :)
http://hugeben.deviantart.com/ check out my gallery of Godzilla artwork! Follow me on Twitter@thebigbadben90.